Oh, this is a lovely set of vignettes. Thank you so much! ♥ I think that my favorite section was probably the one with Saturn, but I loved all of it! I particularly liked how you spent time showing Dawn's interactions with her Pokemon (that's easily one of my favorite things to see in Pokemon fic!), and how you had not beat Barry's dad right away, but have to work for it instead. Her relationship with Barry, and her interactions with the Poke Kid, were also really cute.
I loved this line: Slowly, she started travelling again. She was flattered when people recognised her, and grateful when they didn't.
And, while I'm talking about lines that stood out to me, I have to say that I adored this bit: Saturn started talking to her as if he was delivering a business pitch from the moment she was ushered into his office. The only suggestion of the gravity of events past was the scuffed Galactic logo on the floor.
It really hammered in Saturn's nerves, even before Dawn notes it on her own. And then how Dawn decides to put her faith in him, and believe that he's really changed! That was heartwarming. ♥ Again, thank you so much for writing this for me! I definitely enjoyed it.
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I loved this line: Slowly, she started travelling again. She was flattered when people recognised her, and grateful when they didn't.
And, while I'm talking about lines that stood out to me, I have to say that I adored this bit: Saturn started talking to her as if he was delivering a business pitch from the moment she was ushered into his office. The only suggestion of the gravity of events past was the scuffed Galactic logo on the floor.
It really hammered in Saturn's nerves, even before Dawn notes it on her own. And then how Dawn decides to put her faith in him, and believe that he's really changed! That was heartwarming. ♥ Again, thank you so much for writing this for me! I definitely enjoyed it.