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chocolateowls ([personal profile] chocolateowls) wrote in [personal profile] pokemod 2013-12-20 03:47 pm (UTC)

ohmygodohmygodohmygod

I'll start off by letting you know there's no way I can properly convey how much I LOVE THIS.

THE KALOS ELITE FOUR ARE FABULOUS I AM SO HAPPY YOU INCLUDED ALL OF THEM. I just love the snippets of their personalities and Malva, beautifully disgruntled Malva. They're gossipy but supportive but concerned and I am so in love with this dynamic.

WIKSTROM. Oh man this was so wonderful because his cheesy narration never felt once out of place and I was smiling like an idiot the whole time. This was such a perfect gift for the holidays because it was so fluffy and light and anytime I need cheering up I just think, but remember when Wikstrom was an absolute fool for Dawn? And she laughs at him but it isn't mean-spirited and I can imagine her face as she keeps receiving all these gifts and it's all so sweet I am just sort of asdfghjkl.

EVERYTHING IS SO LOVELY LET ME SHOUT IT FROM A MOUNTAINTOP. Grumpy empoleon is fantastic and Dawn is adorable with glimpses into how strong she is and I really love the line 'Wikstrom laughs at her. Pridefully, he thinks. Perhaps a bit nervously.' and there were even luvdisc and I almost made a prompt about cheesy luvdisc romance lore alone and I hope you understand how much I am flailing with joy over this story.

Thank you so, so much for giving my silly prompt a chance and turning it into so much more than I could have ever hoped for. This absolutely made my holiday! <333333

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